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It's early autumn. My heroine has been sent to the country, to a place that sure sounds like Normandy to me (lots of apple trees & streams & fields). Here's what I wrote a long time ago:

So I followed the stream into the woods instead, and found a little waterfall and a blackberry thicket with plenty of berries left, and a nest of young ducks (? well something more seasonal anyway).

Are ducks still young in early autumn? I just liked the way the words sounded, and the image - but if I'm about to make a fool of myself to people who know about ducks, can you suggest something else?

(NO ONE in my very erudite writer's group has taken up the challenge - various copies of the page have remained suspiciously pristine, despite my piteous little note in the text. I mean, if they knew the ducks were all right they would have said so, right??)

Date: 2005-05-20 04:25 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] redbird
What Kij said about Wisconsin is also true of mallards in New York City. My uneducated guess is that the ducklings that hatch late in the year are born to female mallards who for one reason or another failed to raise any ducklings to maturity in the usual season--and one reason for that is predation by seagulls, turtles, eagles,...

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